Last weeks response

In our last poetry packet there was a poem titled Sort of a Song by, William carlos Williams, and in the new poetry packet is another poem by William Carlos Williams titled, this is just to say the title of the poem contributes to the poem a lot. The poem is three quatrain stanzas. The first stanza pretty much says, look I ate the plums in the fridge, the second one says, I think they were for breakfast and the last one says, forgive me. It is a simple poem that is just what it says. There is no punctuation or capitalization which also contributes the simplisity. Compared to the other poem we read by Williams this one is simple, the other one goes into great detail.

It was weird because I was on the phone with Monique Ramos as I was writting my blogs and I was on this one and hadn't picked a poem yet. I looked down and saw this poem thinking I may responed to this one but before making my final decision I asked her which one she is presenting to the class thinking I could do hers. She told me she was presenting the one about plums which happens to be this one. I thought that was funny so we went over it together, and she told me what she thought about how simple it is and I agreed then thought maybe I shouldn't do this one because of the simplisity. I thought about it a little longer and decided oh well if it's simple I want to do it. So here it is.

I like plums!

Late number 3

Oh No by Robert Creeley is a simple yet interesting poem. The main idea from the poem is death isn't really that bad. Once you've died you make it to wherever you believe in and your friends will be there waiting for you. Your chair will be nice. The poem is the authors interpretation of death and what happens when you die. Once you make it where you're going you will belong there as do your friends, and it's a good place because your friends are smiling and happy to see you. Robert Creeley was an American author who wrote poems and books. The style of the poem is short it is only two quatrain stanzas. There is only one comma and one period at the end of the poem. The first stanza describes the distance you go to get "there" and the second stanza describes the people and the place in short description. Oh No is an interesting title because it almost seems irrelievent to the poem, but maybe just maybe it's how the person started on the journey in an accidental way. Either way the title contributes to the poem in some way. The poem just doesn't seem to go further than that.

Late number 2

Music is truly a beautiful thing and to incorporate any relation of music into a poem is wonderful. 'The Guitarist Tunes Up" by Frances Cornford does that exact thing. The poem describes the guitarist as he prepares to play the guitar, but not as conqueror but as a lover. The guitarest can play the instrument simply because he has love from the woman he plans to play with. He isn't only going to play a guitar but going to be in love; he won't participate in love as a "lordly conqueror" but as a man in love. The whole poem is one sentence with an aa, bb, cc, dd rhyme scheme; the rhythm brings out the musical sense. Playing the guitar is a metaphore for the man's love and in the end the man and the woman play love together. A different way of looking at it is that the guitar is his lover because the last two lines say, "What slight essential things she had to say before they started, he and she, to play." The "she" is the guitar and the reason he doesn't play the guitar like a "lordly conqueror" is because he loves her (the guitar) for the music she makes. Wow it's funny how deep I thought about the poem at first and half way through my response I realized it's as easy as that, the guitarist loves the guitar and that is why he plays her.

Late number 1

I'm missing four poetry responses and this is the first one. I'm using the new poetry packet for all of them.

you fit into me
like a hook into an eye

a fish hook
an open eye
by Margaret Atwood

I found this poem very interesting after reading it a few times. Although it is short the analysis is interesting. In the first stanza she explains how "you" fit's into "me" and then clearifys that the hook is a fish hook and the eye is open. There are manys ways to take this poem in and I thought of it as sad. The thing fitting into her is a fish hook which is small and sharp and the fact that the eye is open makes the relationship of whatever is fitting into her hurtful. I wouldn't want a fish hook in my eye. The thing that fits isn't a good thing because of the metaphore of it fitting like a hook into an eye. Maybe this is a metaphor for love and how love hurts. Fish hooks are small and the love fitting into her is a fish hook making that fit a small fit. The first stanza opens the possibility of a positive relationship but the second stanza corrects it with the bitter hook and eye.